Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Reviewed & Revised


                                                                                                                        Mowrey 1       [K1] 
Adrianna Mowrey
Mrs. Hawkins
October 3, 2013
B BLOCK
Characterization in “Digging” by Seamus Heaney

In the poem “Digging” by Seamus Heaney, the author uses characterization to exemplify the struggle that the son faces between his family and his passion.  [K2] Heaney shows the character’s pride of not following the family business and traditions, shows his hardworking family, and shows having guilt knowing he needs to follow his dream.[K3]  Heaney represents the battle of guilt of not wanting to follow the footsteps of the family business to become a writer.
Throughout the poem Heaney characterizes the son’s pride to not follow the family business as a potato farmer he sometimes desires. Seamus starts the poem off saying “Between my fingers and my thumb/ The squat pen rest; as snug as a gun” (Heaney 1-2) which characterizes the sons’ pride. The “squat pen rest; as snug as a gun” shows the sons’ pride because when Heaney relates the pen as a gun it is represented as a weapon that will help escape the family tradition and pursue his passion.to escape and be free of the family business that his dad wants him to pursue and instead wants to become a writer which he can freely write. [K4]  Heaney also characterizes the son’s small desire for farming when he says, “Loving their cool
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hardness in our hands”(Heaney 14) which utilizes the only thing he will miss. The “cool hardness” of potatoes is the only part the son enjoyed doing with his dad and grandfather that he did for the family business. Seamus shows that the son respects his family’s hard work that they do for a job.portrays the families hard working labor that they do for a job, which the son respects.[K5] 
Heaney also characterizes a hardworking and devoted grandfather, father, and son who are potato farmers for a living, which is a tough line of work. When Heaney states, “he rooted out tall tops, buried the bright edge deep /To scatter new potatoes that we picked”(Heaney 12-13), which characterizes the family as hard working individuals. They are hardworking and determined because they have to “root out all tops” and “scatter new potatoes” which is their routine they have everyday. Heaney characterizes not only his father as hardworking but also characterizes his own father as a hard worker by saying “ By God, the old man could handle a spade, /Just like his old man.”(Heaney15-16) Which exemplifies not only “the old man could handle a spade” but “his old man” can do the same which means the hard work has been taught through generations and has been passed down. Which, the son was taught, by working and watching his father and grandfather “digging” everyday which made it harder for him to tell his family he wanted to become a writer a do something that he loved.
Throughout the poem Heaney characterizes a son who doesn’t have the desire to be a potato farmer anymore, but has tremendous passion to be a writer. The son doesn’t have the desire for “loving their cool hardness in [his] hands”
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anymore. The feeling of the “cool hardness” of the potatoes shouldn’t be the only thing that keeps him being a farmer because this can’t be the one thing he desires
about the job, which can’t push him through an entire lifetime. Towards the end of the poem when Heaney says, “Though living roots awaken in my head. /But I have no spade to follow men like them.”(Heaney 27-28) Heaney characterizes a son knowing there is so much legacy and generations before him hence the “living roots awaken in my head” and not wanting to tell his family but knowing he  “[has] no spade to follow men like them”. Heaney portrays that the son doesn’t have any strength nor interest to follow his grandfather and father footsteps and will go in his own path to be a writer. Which comes to the conclusion of the poem Heaney says “the squat pen rest. /I’ll dig with it”(Heaney29-30) Which shows that he finally had the guts to tell his family that he won’t be a farmer anymore and will be writer. The son doesn’t need the gun to escape anymore because he told his family. When Heaney says, “I’ll dig with it.” This shows that he will have the pride to live with the possible guilt of leaving the family business to become a writer and now be free to write.

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The overall lesson of the poem “Digging” by Seamus Heaney is you don’t have to follow the family business or what your parents want, follow your passions and strive for what you want to do in life and succeed. My sister and I definetly don’t want to go into the family business but we want to be as hardworking as our dad has always been. Some families end up having their children go into the family business but it is their choice. Follow your passion and achieve at what you love doing.

Overall it’s not bad. It’s a bit complicated in some parts just because it’s oddly worded. Try reading it yourself and see how you can simplify it a bit. You might also
want to go into a little more detail on everything and think of the hidden meanings behind the story not just the ones that were a little more obvious. (Hint: use a lot of the notes we took in class)

 [K1]Need a header (Mowrey 1, 2, 3)
 [K2]Change it to “between his family tradition and his passion”
 [K3]Really confusing… Don’t really get it. Also have a lot of commas. Maybe you can break it up into diff. sentences or reword it.
 [K4]Really long.. shorten it so its something like “ because when Heany relates the pen as a gun it is represtented as a weapon that will help him escape the family tradition and pursue his passion.”
 [K5]Seamus shows that the son respects his family’s hard work that they do for a job.
 [K6]Don’t restate what your whole essay was about… show how this applies to our life or your life. For Example say how you or your sister don’t want to follow your parents trade or how Ms. Hawkins didn’t become a nurse like every other woman in her family. 

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